【教學(xué)設(shè)想】一、選題設(shè)想《巴黎圣母院》是雨果的代表作,無論從思想內(nèi)容還是藝術(shù)風(fēng)格都有明顯的浪漫主義特征:奇異曲折、扣人心弦的故事情節(jié);妙趣橫生、別出心裁的奇遇巧合;強(qiáng)烈鮮明的美丑、善惡對比;豐富生動(dòng)、珠璣迸發(fā)、富有哲理意味的語言。通過導(dǎo)讀,來消除學(xué)生對外國名著的畏難情緒,增加學(xué)生課外閱讀的興趣和信心;讓學(xué)生整體把握作品,窺一斑而識全豹,讓學(xué)生高屋建瓴,了解其旨意,以極為精確而又充滿意蘊(yùn)的文字,對名著的概述及精要部分做了介紹;引導(dǎo)學(xué)生自主探究,交流合作,培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的獨(dú)立思考的學(xué)習(xí)慣,指點(diǎn)進(jìn)行名著閱讀的門徑。作為導(dǎo)讀課,教師應(yīng)注意不可“越位”,在學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的過程中,教師的“導(dǎo)”固然重要,學(xué)生的“讀”更不可或缺,應(yīng)避免以“導(dǎo)讀”來代替名著閱讀。因此,《巴黎圣母院》的教學(xué)定位為基于課內(nèi),面向課外,以求達(dá)到以學(xué)帶讀,以讀促學(xué)的目的。
This lesson aims at making a poster about protecting wildlife after reading some posters. During reading students are guided to understand the content and try to summarize the posters with one sentence. Then students are guided to try to make a poster about protecting wildlife.1. Read the two posters and try to understand the summary sentences.2. Look at the two posters and try to understand what emotions they express.3. Try to summarize the features of posters4. Try to make a poster about wildlife.1. Look at the two posters and try to understand what emotions they express.2. Try to summarize the features of posters3. Try to make a poster about wildlife.Step 1 Lead inLook at the the posters on the textbook and ask:Which emotions do the posters communicate ?Step 2 Read the poster and answer the questions.1. What do you think of the animals in the poster on the left ?I think it is frightening and ugly.2. Why do we should protect the ugly animals ?All species--the good, the bad, and the ugly-- should be treated equally.The world needs all kinds--without variety, our planet cannot survive.3. Why are billions of trees being cut down every year ?To make paper for humans.4. What result will be lead to after the trees are cut down ?A lost of animal homes are being destroyed./The habitat of wildlife is being destroyed.Step 3 Find the feature of posters1. What does each poster use to stir up emotions ?On the left, it makes us a little frightened and it looks a little ugly, but it can activate our curiosity--What is it? And What is wrong with it?On the right, it makes us feel a little sad and want to protect them.
The activity topic of this section is "report an ongoing event", and the structure is the passive voice of present continuous tense. Rare wild animals are suffering from large-scale poaching, and species are on the brink of danger. Rescue operations are underway. "Being" and "suffering" are the meanings of the present progressive passive voice.The usage of present progressive passive voice is of great importance in writing a good discourse and appreciating some difficult language items, so it is vital to master it and use it flexibly in a context.1. Motivate Ss to deepen the understanding of the usage of present progressive passive voice in a fixed context.2. Enable Ss to master the usage of present progressive passive voice and use it flexibly in a context.3. Lead Ss to construct sentences or appreciate sentences used master it and use it flexibly in a context.1. Help students to appreciate the function of the usage of present progressive passive voice in a sentence2. Instruct students to write essays using the proper usage of present progressive passive voice.Look at the picture and tell me what are workers doing? What is the house being done?
The theme of this unit is human and nature, focusing on the theme of wildlife protection. Nature is a complex ecosystem, in which there are delicate balance between animals and plants. Because of the role of the food chain, the extinction of one species will produce influence, causing a series of chain reaction. Large scale extinction of species will have a serious and even irreversible impact on the ecosystem, resulting in immeasurable losses. Therefore, it is of great significance to protect wild species. To protect wild species is to protect human beings themselves. The motto of this unit is "when the buying stops, the killing can too,” which is a public service advertising slogan to protect wildlife. It tells people that every rhinoceros horn, every fur, every bowl of shark fin soup, every Ivory product, and every tiger bone product, etc. consumed by human beings, are innocent wild animals slaughtered behind them. The mission of wild aid is to ban illegal trade in endangered wildlife and mitigate climate change. It aims to educate the public to reduce the consumption demand for endangered wildlife products through public publicity and improve the awareness of environmental protection.1. Improve the awareness of wildlife protection by acquiring the knowledge of wildlife protection.2. Focus on environmental protection and protection of all lives.3. Analysis of the living environment of wild animals with appropriate thinking mode.4. Skillfully use the vocabulary and grammar knowledge of this unit to cultivate self-study ability according to the unit content5. Develop cooperative learning ability through discussion and other ways1. Enable the Ss to talk about the current situation of wild animals.2. Guide the Ss to summarize the main idea of each paragraph as well as the main idea of the text.
1. 標(biāo)題首先根據(jù)海報(bào)的特點(diǎn)、格式寫明標(biāo)題。海報(bào)中往往把內(nèi)容作為大標(biāo)題。例如: Save the earth, Save the birds。2. 正文部分不同的海報(bào)其正文部分的側(cè)重點(diǎn)不同。對于介紹性的海報(bào), 首先要引出話題, 其次列出原因, 最后是總結(jié)。對于宣傳類的海報(bào), 要寫明具體內(nèi)容, 如: 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容, 地點(diǎn)以及參加活動(dòng)的注意事項(xiàng), 主持或舉辦單位等。1. 圖片: 要選擇引人注目的圖片, 與主題要相關(guān), 色彩明亮。話題句式 1. It is a treasure of our country. 它是我國的國寶。2. Believe it or not, at present only several thousand pandas exist in the world. 信不信由你, 目前世界上僅現(xiàn)存幾千只熊貓。 3.It’s because of human activities that tigers are endangered. 正是因?yàn)槿祟惖幕顒?dòng), 老虎處于瀕危的狀態(tài)。4. Many wild animals are in danger of dying out. 很多野生動(dòng)物面臨著滅絕的危險(xiǎn)。 5. The government has taken effective measures to protect them. 政府已采取有效的措施來保護(hù)它們。6. People should raise the awareness of the protection of wild animals. 人們應(yīng)該提高保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的意識。 7. It’s amazing that there are merely less than 1, 000 finless porpoises living in China. 非常令人吃驚, 目前中國僅有不足1 000只江豚。
1.用CAI課件模擬汽車的啟動(dòng)過程。師生共同討論:①如果作用在物體上的力為恒力,且物體以勻速運(yùn)動(dòng),則力對物體做功的功率保持不變。此情況下,任意一段時(shí)間內(nèi)的平均功率與任一瞬時(shí)的瞬時(shí)功率都是相同的。②很多動(dòng)力機(jī)器通常有一個(gè)額定功率,且通常使其在額定功率狀態(tài)工作(如汽車),根據(jù)P=FV可知:當(dāng)路面阻力較小時(shí),牽引力也小,速度大,即汽車可以跑得快些;當(dāng)路面阻力較大,或爬坡時(shí),需要比較大的牽引力,速度必須小。這就是爬坡時(shí)汽車換低速擋的道理。③如果動(dòng)力機(jī)器在實(shí)際功率小于額定功率的條件下工作,例如汽車剛剛起動(dòng)后的一段時(shí)間內(nèi),速度逐漸增大過程中,牽引力仍可增大,即F和v可以同時(shí)增大,但是這一情況應(yīng)以二者乘積等于額定功率為限度,即當(dāng)實(shí)際功率大于額定功率以后,這種情況不可能實(shí)現(xiàn)。
3.進(jìn)一步體會力是產(chǎn)生加速度的原因,并通過牛頓第二定律來理解勻速圓周運(yùn)動(dòng)、變速圓周運(yùn)動(dòng)及一般曲線運(yùn)動(dòng)的各自特點(diǎn)。(三)、情感、態(tài)度與價(jià)值觀1.在實(shí)驗(yàn)中,培養(yǎng)學(xué)生動(dòng)手、探究的習(xí)慣。2.體會實(shí)驗(yàn)的意義,感受成功的快樂,激發(fā)學(xué)生探究問題的熱情、樂于學(xué)習(xí)的品質(zhì)。教學(xué)重點(diǎn)1.體會牛頓第二定律在向心力上的應(yīng)用。2.明確向心力的意義、作用、公式及其變形,并經(jīng)行計(jì)算。教學(xué)難點(diǎn)1.對向心力的理解及來源的尋找。2.運(yùn)用向心力、向心加速度的知識解決圓周運(yùn)動(dòng)問題。教學(xué)過程(一)、 引入新課:復(fù)習(xí)提問:勻速圓周運(yùn)動(dòng)的物體的加速度——向心加速度,它的方向和大小有何特點(diǎn)呢?學(xué)生回答后進(jìn)一步引導(dǎo):那做勻速圓周運(yùn)動(dòng)物體的受力有什么特點(diǎn)呢?是什么力使物體做圓周運(yùn)動(dòng)而不沿直線飛出?請同學(xué)們先閱讀教材
教學(xué)設(shè)想:本節(jié)課的主題是“生命之綠,璞玉心靈”,用圈點(diǎn)批注法解讀愛綠的感情,讓學(xué)生在批注中明確“綠”的象征意義,而不只是結(jié)論的傳遞。同時(shí)借助于閱讀、感受和理解把握作者對綠的認(rèn)識是不斷升華的,由一般對生命希望之綠的喜愛,到與綠交往后被它的不畏強(qiáng)暴,永遠(yuǎn)向陽的精神所折服,最后在特定的時(shí)代背景下綠在作者的心目中已經(jīng)成了我們民族不屈精神的象征。讓學(xué)生評中求解,評中悟情,評中明理,評中品味。教學(xué)進(jìn)程:一、導(dǎo)語上節(jié)課我們學(xué)習(xí)了朱自清的《綠》,初步了解了讀書動(dòng)筆的基本方法,這節(jié)課我們繼續(xù)用圈點(diǎn)批注的方法來學(xué)習(xí)陸蠡的散文《囚綠記》。二、釋題師:看標(biāo)題,囚綠之“綠”在文中具體指什么?(一株常春藤)“囚”就是囚禁的意思,那題目就是記述囚禁綠色常春藤的經(jīng)過。三、圈點(diǎn)、把握情節(jié)作者為什么要囚綠呢?文中除了寫“囚綠”之外,還寫了哪些有關(guān)綠的意念和行動(dòng)?帶著這樣的質(zhì)疑用自己喜歡的方式朗讀課文,請同學(xué)們?nèi)c(diǎn)出疑難字詞,或結(jié)合書下注釋,或同學(xué)合作解決,解決不了的,可提出來我們共同解決。標(biāo)注段落節(jié)次。勾畫出表現(xiàn)作者對綠意念和行動(dòng)的句子。
2.表示現(xiàn)階段正在進(jìn)行的被動(dòng)動(dòng)作(該動(dòng)作在說話的瞬間未必正在進(jìn)行)。Many interesting experiments are being carried out these days.(說話時(shí),并不一定正在進(jìn)行)3.表示一種經(jīng)常性的被動(dòng)行為,常和always,constantly 等表示頻度的副詞連用,這種用法常常帶有贊揚(yáng)或厭惡的感情色彩。He is always being praised by the leader.4.表示按計(jì)劃或安排主語將要承受謂語動(dòng)詞所表示的動(dòng)作(僅限于少數(shù)及物動(dòng)詞)。A party is being held tonight.Step 4 Special cases1.像take care of, look after, talk about, think of等動(dòng)詞與介詞構(gòu)成的短語用于現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)時(shí), 其中的介詞不可省略。The ways to stop illegally hunting are being talked about. 2.可與部分情態(tài)動(dòng)詞連用,表示對正在發(fā)生的事情的推測。She may be being punished by her mother.3.有時(shí)可表示按計(jì)劃或安排將要進(jìn)行的一個(gè)被動(dòng)動(dòng)作。A celebration is being held this weekend for his success.4.某些表示“狀態(tài)、心理活動(dòng)、存在”等的動(dòng)詞,如have,want,need,love,一般不用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài),而常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)。With the population increasing,more land is needed.5.“be+under/in+n.”可表示現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)的被動(dòng)意義。My computer is under repair.=My computer is being repaired.
交談時(shí)雙方的空間距離也有一定講究。和朋友談話、和陌生人談話、和異性談話、招呼長者和上級,都需要有一個(gè)合適的距離。如果上級故意“縮減”與下級人員通常談話時(shí)的距離,那是表示對下級的關(guān)切。說話的時(shí)候需要一面想,一面說,為了控制說話的主動(dòng)權(quán),免得被別人插人、打斷,人們可以使用“唔”“啊”之類的音節(jié),表示“話還沒有說完,你別著急”之類的意思。空白也表示意思,在說唱藝術(shù)中,什么時(shí)候停頓,停多久,都有講究,以便使交際更有成效。這就是說,空間和時(shí)間的因素也在交際中得到了適當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用。所以,各種伴隨動(dòng)作也是交際的工具。它們一般都是在語言的基礎(chǔ)上產(chǎn)生的。即使像“察顏觀色”這一類特定的交際方式,也必須有語言的交際為基礎(chǔ),預(yù)先有了一定的了解,對方才能領(lǐng)會??傊?,在上述的種種交際工具當(dāng)中,身勢等伴隨動(dòng)作是非語言的交際工具;旗語之類是建立在語言、文字基礎(chǔ)之上的輔助性交際工具;文字是建立在語言基礎(chǔ)之上的一種最重要的輔助交際工具;
【設(shè)計(jì)思想】詩歌教學(xué)的關(guān)鍵是感受詩景,體味詩情,領(lǐng)悟詩意,在此基礎(chǔ)上孕育理解能力、鑒賞能力和審美情感。詩景、詩情、詩意均由文字來承載,把握文字組合的張力,是讀詩賞詩的抓手。杜甫的詩歌素以煉字精深、涵蓋深遠(yuǎn)著稱,以《登高》而言,往往淡淡一字,平平一語,便籠大千于方寸,縮古今于一瞬。故細(xì)讀文本,咀嚼字句,便是賞景、悟情、會意的基本路徑。其次,不朽名作的特點(diǎn)是寄寓深廣,古今評價(jià)甚多,見仁見智,不一而足。這正是培養(yǎng)學(xué)生問題意識、探究意識的極好憑借。第三,詩為語言之精華,是詩人心里涌出的情感之流。誦讀乃賞詩之要著,精心感悟之時(shí),設(shè)身處地,心惟口誦,是理解詩意的關(guān)鍵一步?;谑?,筆者作如下同課異構(gòu),殊途同歸?!窘虒W(xué)目標(biāo)】1.理解本詩所繪之景、所抒之情及繪景、抒情之法。2.學(xué)會用意象疊加法、字句推敲法、誦讀體驗(yàn)法等欣賞詩歌。3.感受杜甫心系蒼生、情寄邦國、憂國憂民、兼濟(jì)天下的博大情懷。
一、引入:教師列舉以下言論,讓學(xué)生辨出哪些是孟子的,哪些不是。學(xué)生不知道的,由教師說出。學(xué)生不理解的,教師作簡要解說。1.天將降大任于是人也,必先苦其心志,勞其筋骨,餓其體膚,空乏其身,行拂亂其所為。所以動(dòng)心忍性,曾益其所不能。(孟子)2.域民不以封疆之界,固國不以山溪之險(xiǎn),威天下不以兵革之利。得道者多助,失道者寡助。(孟子)3.魚,亦我所欲也,熊掌,亦我所欲也,二者不可得兼,舍魚而取熊掌者也。生,亦我所欲也,義,亦我所欲也,二者不可得兼,舍生而取義者也。(孟子)4.富貴不能淫,貧賤不能移,威武不能屈。(孟子)5.非禮勿視,非禮勿聽,非禮勿言,非禮勿動(dòng)。(孔子)6.無惻隱之心非人也,無羞惡之心非人也,無辭讓之心非人也,無是非之心非人也。(孟子)7.庖有肥肉,廄有肥馬,民有饑色,野有餓殍。(孟子)8.人性之善也,猶水之就下也;人無有不善,水無有不下。(孟子)9.民為貴,社稷次之,君為輕。(孟子)10.君子坦蕩蕩,小人常戚戚。(孔子)
(一)導(dǎo)入[以視頻欣賞導(dǎo)入]同學(xué)們,剛才欣賞的是大家熟悉、喜歡的電視劇《亮劍》中的精彩片段——李云龍論述什么是“亮劍”精神?同學(xué)們聽后覺得好不好?牛不牛?“亮劍”精神簡單理解就是敢于與強(qiáng)大的敵人(對手)做斗爭,無論對手多么強(qiáng)大,都要滿腔勇氣和信心,永不放棄、永不言敗,要敢于亮劍……今天我們一起來學(xué)習(xí)世界100部著名文學(xué)作品之一、美國里程碑式30部文學(xué)作品之一的世界名著——海明威的《老人與?!?,看看主人公桑提亞哥“硬漢”性格和李云龍“亮劍”精神有么相似的地方。(請同學(xué)們翻到課文,課件顯示課題《老人與海》)(二)走進(jìn)作者:請同學(xué)們自己談收集到的有關(guān)海明威的資料,然后教師梳理出下列核心內(nèi)容識記:(課件顯示)海明威(1899~1961),美國現(xiàn)代作家,20世紀(jì)美國文學(xué)史上最耀眼的名字之一。早期作品表現(xiàn)了第一次世界大戰(zhàn)青年一代的彷徨情緒,以“迷惘的一代”的代表著稱。20世紀(jì)末回到美國,寫了不小以拳擊家、漁民、獵人等為主人公的短篇小說,創(chuàng)造了“硬漢子”性格。
【教學(xué)內(nèi)容】人教版高中思想政治必修3文化生活第一單元第二課第二框題《文化塑造人生》。【教學(xué)目標(biāo)】1.知識目標(biāo)理解優(yōu)秀文化如何豐富人的精神世界、增強(qiáng)人的精神力量及促進(jìn)人的全面發(fā)展。2.能力目標(biāo)(1)能賞析優(yōu)秀文化產(chǎn)品,感悟積極向上的文化生活對于豐富人們的精神世界,增強(qiáng)人民的精神力量的意義,確信其促進(jìn)人的全面發(fā)展的重要作用。(2)結(jié)合文化塑造人生,不斷豐富自己的精神世界,促進(jìn)自身的全面發(fā)展3.情感、態(tài)度、價(jià)值觀目標(biāo)樹立正確的世界觀、人生觀、價(jià)值觀,豐富精神世界,增強(qiáng)精神力量,接受優(yōu)秀文化,促進(jìn)自身的全面發(fā)展?!窘虒W(xué)重點(diǎn)】優(yōu)秀文化能豐富人的精神世界,增強(qiáng)人的精神力量【教學(xué)難點(diǎn)】文化促進(jìn)人的全面發(fā)展【教學(xué)準(zhǔn)備】資料收集、多媒體課件【課時(shí)安排】1課時(shí)【教學(xué)過程】視頻導(dǎo)入:播放我國殘疾人藝術(shù)團(tuán)在春節(jié)晚會上的精美舞蹈《千手觀音》。
(1)請同學(xué)們結(jié)合日常生活實(shí)例和教材分析說明人類要在世界各地消除貧困并保持人口的合理容量任務(wù)的艱巨性?(2)采取何種措施才能更好的解決這一問題的出現(xiàn)?教師總結(jié)(1)現(xiàn)實(shí)中的人口問題(如人口過快增長、人口城市化和人口老齡化等)引發(fā)了嚴(yán)重的資源問題和環(huán)境問題。①發(fā)達(dá)國家的人均消耗資源量很大,索取資源和轉(zhuǎn)嫁有害生產(chǎn)的地域超出了本國的范圍。②發(fā)展中國家不僅人口數(shù)量多,人均消費(fèi)水平低,而且一些國家的人口仍在快速增長。若在現(xiàn)有的經(jīng)濟(jì)基礎(chǔ)上,把發(fā)展中國家人均生活質(zhì)量提高到與發(fā)達(dá)國家相當(dāng)?shù)乃?,所引發(fā)的資源短缺和環(huán)境問題將會相當(dāng)嚴(yán)重,解決的難度也很大。(2)I就整個(gè)世界來說:①國際社會要倡導(dǎo)各國,尤其發(fā)展中國家要盡最大可能把人口控制在合理的規(guī)模之內(nèi);②建立公平的秩序,保證大多數(shù)人擁有不斷追求高水平生活質(zhì)量的平等權(quán)利。
五.研習(xí)第一段:1.誦讀指導(dǎo)要處理好句中停頓2.請學(xué)生對照注釋翻譯本段重點(diǎn)詞句:學(xué)不可以已已:停止。青,取之于藍(lán)而青于藍(lán)于:從;比。木直中繩中:zhàng符合,合于。雖有槁暴,不復(fù)挺者,揉使之然也有通又,揉通煣,以火烘木,使其彎曲。然:這樣。翻譯:故木受繩則直,金就礪則利,君子博學(xué)而日參省乎己,則知明而行無過矣。所以木材經(jīng)墨線畫過(再用斧鋸加工)就直了,金屬刀劍拿到磨刀石上(磨過)就鋒利了,君子廣博地學(xué)習(xí)并且每天對自己檢驗(yàn)反省,就能智慧明達(dá),行為沒有過錯(cuò)了。3.本段是從哪個(gè)角度論述中心論點(diǎn)的?明確:本段是從學(xué)習(xí)的意義這個(gè)角度論述中心論點(diǎn)的。荀子認(rèn)為人的知識、道德、才能都不是天生成的,而是后天不斷學(xué)習(xí)獲得的,學(xué)習(xí)的意義十分重大,所以學(xué)習(xí)不能停止。4.本段中幾個(gè)比喻句是為了說明什么道理?學(xué)生討論發(fā)言,教師明確:
3、文化是人們的一種素養(yǎng)(1)人的文化素養(yǎng)是在社會生活、實(shí)踐中形成的。每個(gè)人所具有的文化素養(yǎng),不是天生的,而是通過對社會生活的體驗(yàn),特別是通過參與文化生活、接受知識文化教育而逐步培養(yǎng)出來的。文化素養(yǎng)的形成,離不開生活、實(shí)踐和教育。人們在社會實(shí)踐中創(chuàng)造和發(fā)展文化,也在社會生活中獲得和享用文化。(2)人的文化素養(yǎng)表現(xiàn)在日常言行中。教師活動(dòng):引導(dǎo)學(xué)生閱讀教材7頁“公交車漫畫”材料,并思考所反映的問題學(xué)生活動(dòng):積極思考并討論問題教師點(diǎn)評:人們的精神活動(dòng)離不開物質(zhì)活動(dòng),人們的文化素養(yǎng)總是要通過他在日常生活中的言行、在社會實(shí)踐活動(dòng)中的表現(xiàn)等表現(xiàn)出來。我們通過觀察人們的社會行為,就可以從中透視人們的精神世界和精神生活。4、文化的傳承和發(fā)展離不開物質(zhì)載體。社會文化和精神產(chǎn)品離不開物質(zhì)載體,一個(gè)時(shí)代的文化和精神產(chǎn)品,往往是這一時(shí)代社會發(fā)展軌跡的反映。
Good expressions that students can choose to use: help the travelers choose which tour to take1. In my opinion, you could/might choose…, because you prefer to…2. …could be a perfect choice for you, for…3. As far as I am concerned, you would enjoy…, for…4. …would probably suit you, because you enjoy/love/hate doing…Step 5 Passage ConsolidationLanguage appreciation:1. You can then spend three days exploring the rainforest with a local guide and enjoying the plants and animals unique to the rainforest. 在接下來的三天里,您可以在當(dāng)?shù)貙?dǎo)游的陪同下,深入雨林進(jìn)行探索,欣賞雨林特有的動(dòng)植物。本句主體結(jié)構(gòu)為spend some time doing sth. 2. Inca builders cut stones to exact sizes so that nothing was needed to hold walls together other than the perfect fit of the stones. 印加的建筑工人將石頭切割成精確的尺寸,僅僅憑著石頭間的完美契合,即可穩(wěn)固墻體。本句為so that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句。nothing與the perfect fit為并列成分; other than在句中意為“除了”。Step 6 HomeworkSuppose you will travel to Peru, write a short essay about your three-day tour plan.
Is there a clear purpose for the trip? :Does each paragraph have a clear main idea? Does the writer use the present continuous tense for future plans?Does the writer use commas, stops, and question marks correctly? Are all the words spelt correctly?Are all the proper nouns capitalized?Revise your draft according to your partner's comments.Step 5:The summary of how to write a travel plan.旅游計(jì)劃是一種常見的應(yīng)用文寫作。旅游可分為觀光游、文化游、美食游及探險(xiǎn)游等不同類型,因此旅游計(jì)劃也要根據(jù)不同的旅游目的進(jìn)行設(shè)計(jì)。常規(guī)的旅游計(jì)劃需要明確以下幾個(gè)方面的問題:Travel planWhen will you leave for? Where is your the destination?How will you get there?What will you do there?How long will you there?Is there a clear purpose for the trip? 為了提升旅行計(jì)劃的層級,還需注意以下幾個(gè)方面的問題:1.每段是否有明確清晰的主題;2.用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)代替一般將來時(shí);3.用更高級的形容詞詞匯。例如:表達(dá)“好”時(shí),不要總用“nice”,我們還可以用“smart, clean, excellent, exciting, beautiful, wonderful, clever, famous, grand”等表達(dá)更具有指向性的詞匯;4.用更高級的動(dòng)詞詞匯。比如:我們可以用“seem stand, lie .get stay, remain, look . sound, become . keep, grow”等代替"be";
The theme of the reading and thinking is about “Understanding how a problem was solved”.The Listening & Speaking & Talking is about international co-work to protect the Mount Tai, in which the students from seven countries came up with many solutions even create the Mount Tai App. This section aims at showing how to solve a difficult and even tough problem about protecting the cultural heritage by the international co-work. So in this section, cultivating students’ international awareness is very clear and important. Concretely, with the economic development, how to balance the protection of cultural relics and social development is a big challenge for human. In the 1950s, the Egyptian government wanted to build the Aswan Dam across the Nile to control floods, produce electricity and water farms. But the proposal led to protests because it would destroy a lot of cultural relics. The Egyptian had no choice but ask the UN for help. Therefore, a international cooperation about how to protect the cultural relics began, which involved the time length about 20 years and a large amount of fund. Then, the problems was solved. 1. Read quickly to get the main idea and the structure of the article; read careful to get detailed information.2. Learn to use the reading strategy---making a timeline3. Learn how to solve a tough problem by asking for help and cooperation4. Have the international awareness and understand the great strength of international cooperation.1. Read quickly to get the main idea and the structure of the article; read careful to get detailed information.2. Learn to use the reading strategy---making a timeline.3. Learn how to solve a tough problem by asking for help and cooperation.