3. 教學任務二:PPT子任務一、二、三感悟詩情:那么為什么不能輕易對詩人詩歌進行刪減呢?除了詩歌語言及內容方面的影響外,還有重要的一點就是:感情。情感是詩歌的尺度,而非長短。下面將從知人論世的角度再讀詩歌。重點賞析曹操的“憂”與“解”和陶淵明的“誤”與“歸”。通過編寫詩人年譜的方式,呈現(xiàn)詩人的各個人生階段的經歷和當時的時代背景,讓詩人回到歷史現(xiàn)場,讓自己代入詩人境遇,以意逆志。通過查閱資料和編寫年譜,可以了解到:曹操既能橫槊,又能賦詩,如曹丕在《典論·自敘》中所說:“上(曹操)雅好詩文書籍,雖在軍旅,手不釋卷。”《短歌行》中多用典故和善用比興或許就源于此。其次,曹操雖出身仕宦,但門第不算高貴,這樣的家庭地位讓他有著出人頭地、建功立業(yè)的迫切愿望,因此,“唯才是舉”是曹操出于現(xiàn)實的理性選擇。再次,曹操寫《短歌行》的確切時間已難考證,如取赤壁大戰(zhàn)前的說法,曹操已五十四歲,來日無多的緊迫感、賢才歸附的愿望自然尤為強烈。
第二課時為知人。即利用預習所查到的資料、學生之間的分享以及教師預備的材料,合作探究三個問題:曹操為何如此渴望賢才?天下歸心的愿望是否實現(xiàn)?如何評價曹操?本課時采用創(chuàng)設情境的方式,從劉備、曹丕、晚年曹操等多重角度評價曹操,自領角色,利用資料有邏輯地證明自己的觀點。教師出示不同學者評價,師生共同研討評價的技巧和原則,嘗試寫作短小文學評論。這是解決憂的果。第三課時為回味。創(chuàng)設誦讀比賽的情境,在比賽和評價中研討標點符號的作用,如何讀出曹操詩歌獨特的特點,以及帶著對曹操的認識讀出自己的理解。(每組評出最佳朗讀者和最佳評論員,上傳優(yōu)秀視頻)。這是為了讓學生最后讀出憂。第五,板書設計。以上是我本節(jié)課教學設計的板書,體現(xiàn)了分析本首詩的基本思路和學習方法。
學生展示:魯迅在《拿來主義》討論“送去主義”時使用的不是徐、劉二人歐洲巡展的事實,而是《大晚報》評價二人歐洲巡展為“發(fā)揚國光”這一事實,故用了“叫作”,且是加引號的“發(fā)揚國光”;用“送”字表明自己針對的對象不是梅蘭芳本人及其藝術,而是“送梅蘭芳博士到蘇聯(lián)去”的人及其行為,即強行將中國戲劇與象征主義相聯(lián)系的牽強附會的行徑??梢?,魯迅針對的是當時國民政府一味送去的行徑和主流媒體宣揚為“發(fā)揚國光”的輿論導向。設計意圖:有的放矢,針砭時弊是雜文的突出特征。耙子指向哪兒、時弊是什么是必須思考的問題。有學生誤以為魯迅在批判徐悲鴻、劉海粟、梅蘭芳等人,甚至調侃說魯迅“懟人狂魔”“老陰陽師”。通過此活動,細讀文本,還原歷史,抓住“叫作”與“送”的主體,找準魯迅批判的對象和針對的現(xiàn)象。同時,引導學生用不可隨意使用所謂網絡“梗文化”來消解名人、偉人等事跡的嚴肅性,不可以娛樂心態(tài)品讀經典作品。
一、說目標本課我制定的教學目標有三:1.學習《荷塘月色》中細膩、傳神的語言,體會新鮮貼切的比喻、通感所產生的表達效果。2.通過朗讀、品讀、賞讀,掌握《荷塘月色》描寫景物及情景交融的寫法,體會其嚴謹?shù)慕Y構。3.了解心中情和筆下景,體會本文感性與理性交織構成的獨特情致,培養(yǎng)學生高尚的審美情趣。我確定以上目標的依據(jù)有三:一是基于對新課標的理解:新的語文課程標準在閱讀上的要求是“感受文學形象,品味文學作品語言和藝術技巧的表現(xiàn)力,初步鑒賞文學作品?!倍腔趯滩牡恼J識:《荷塘月色》作為本單元第一篇課文,承擔著奠定基礎的任務,即幫助學生通過閱讀本課,理解和明確散文應該“讀什么”和學會散文應該“怎么讀”,然后在學習《故都的秋》和《囚綠記》的過程中去實踐、檢驗、修正,不斷增強散文鑒賞的能力,從而提高審美情趣。
環(huán)節(jié)二,在品讀過程中把重點字詞的讀音和意義融入其中。這是新課程標準的體現(xiàn)環(huán)節(jié)三,提出問題:作者的思想情感在文中是怎樣變化的?讓學生帶著這個問題再次自讀課文。三、仔細品讀,把握感情。引導學生去把握全文的感情基調,解決剛才提出的問題。 賞析語段,品味語言,在把握全文感情基調的基礎上,啟發(fā)學生聯(lián)想,假設眼前有一片荷塘,設問學生會看到什么?很自然會看到:葉,花,聞到花香。在此基礎上逐步引導學生賞析課文精彩語段四、五自然段,當然教師要作必要的啟發(fā)指點,尤其是在那些容易被忽略之處,以下僅舉一例: 荷香與歌聲有什么可比的共同點?(領會通感手法的運用)在點撥通感這一修辭手法時,我舉了詩人艾青描寫日本著名指揮家小澤征爾的話:“你的眼睛在,你的耳朵在傾聽?!边@個例子能詩意的解釋通感這一修辭手法。
(三)以讀帶講,感知文本1.學生朗讀首先我會讓學生結合書下的注釋自由大聲的朗讀本篇課文,掃清文字障礙,感知詞意。此環(huán)節(jié)可以讓學生在誦讀中解決詞中的生字困難,疏通文意。2.教師范讀我會聲情并茂、感情充沛的進行配樂朗誦。此環(huán)節(jié)力求讓學生感受到詞的音樂美,懂得詞的朗誦方法,為深入理解詞的內容做準備。(四)精講細讀,深入文本此環(huán)節(jié)主要解決本課的重點,所以我會運用合作教學法和點撥教學法引導學生分析詞中典故,探討作者寫作目的。首先我將學生分為孫權劉裕組、劉義隆組、拓跋燾組、廉頗組四個小組。然后對這四個小組分別提出思考問題,讓學生以小組為單位解決我提出的問題。在學生討論結束后分別找每個小組中的一位同學回答,并引導點撥學生答案。孫權劉裕組:
一、說教材選修課是在必修課程基礎上的拓展與提高,它力爭促進學生各自特長和個性的形成。我們在必修部分已經學習了李白的一首古風《蜀道難》,學生對李白其人及其詩風已有了一定的了解。本單元的任務是“因聲求氣,吟詠詩韻”,它要求我們通過對古典詩歌聲律特點的把握,學習有感情地吟詠,誦讀作品,并深入地了解詩歌的感情?!秾⑦M酒》一詩時而奔放,時而深沉,感情大起大落變化明顯,學生容易進入吟詠和體會情感的體驗閱讀中。二、說教法學法現(xiàn)代語文觀念中提倡語文教學要多讀,要培養(yǎng)學生的語感,特別是對一些優(yōu)秀的古詩文??梢娫趯W習古代詩文的過程中,誦讀是非常重要的,有助于加深學生對課文思想內容的理解??梢栽诶首x中理解詩文的內容,所謂“讀書百遍其義自見”,在反復的朗讀中可以慢慢體會詩人所要表達的思想感情,因此本堂課我采取以誦讀為線索,完成對詩歌思想內容的理性思考。
四、說教學過程(一)結合現(xiàn)實、自然導入隨著我國開放的深入發(fā)展,國外的科學、文化、技術以及資產階級的腐朽思想,生活作風等等也隨之大量涌來,我們應采取怎樣的態(tài)度和方法才是正確的呢?魯迅先生在30年代就繼承文化遺產問題曾寫過一篇雜文,我們可以從中獲得那些啟示呢?(二)整體感知、疏瀹文意1.請同學介紹“我所知道的魯迅”,教師補充寫作背景。教師有針對性的進行預習檢查,能促使學生養(yǎng)成課前預習的習慣。2.理清文章的思路,分析文章的整體結構教師范讀課文,針對較難的字音進行正讀。學生快速瀏覽課文,把握全文框架,小組討論后分出層次。(讓學生通過自主合作探究來概括文意可以讓同學們參與到教學活動中,鍛煉學生實際動手能力)
本環(huán)節(jié)利用多媒體展示的教學手段,通過創(chuàng)設優(yōu)美的情景來渲染氣氛,引導學生接受美的熏陶,增強學生學習興趣。教師先播放蓮花的圖片,讓學生們談談自己聯(lián)想到的詩詞曲賦或文章,來激發(fā)學生的學習熱情,隨后教師總結,引出現(xiàn)代寫荷花的名篇《荷塘月色》,從而導入新課。導語部分的設計既給了學生美感享受又自然的導入了新課。(二)初讀文本,把握結構本環(huán)節(jié)主要采用了小組合作法讓學生以小組合作的形式探索文章夜游順序和情感變化這兩條線索發(fā)展,教師適當?shù)倪M行點撥,讓學生通過探索文章線索完成對本課“圓形結構”把握。目的是發(fā)揮學生主導作用,自主學習、把握文章結構美。(三)選讀文本,分析手法在本環(huán)節(jié)中主要運用講授法和問答法。讓學生反復誦讀課文第4、5、6段,找出作者使用修辭手法修飾了的景物,隨后師生問答作者運用了什么修辭手法來描寫“荷塘”“月色”“荷花”“荷香”等景物的,又達到了什么樣的效果呢?最后由教師來具體講解本文中學生不熟悉的寫作手法(如:通感)。
【教材分析】The topic of this unit is about teenage life, which belongs to the theme context of “humans and oneself”.As teenagers who shoulder the responsibility of “Chinese great dream”, they must fully know themselves, including their strengths, weaknesses and challenges etc. They are supposed to improve themselves continuously and readily study their subjects, and thus foster their strategies and confidence in lifelong studies.This period is entitled the freshmen challenges, which mainly concerns some big challenges for new students in Senior high school. In this period, a teacher should lead students to find out what their challenges are and guide them to figure out how to crack the challenges and better themselves. More importantly, a teacher should instruct students to absorb new language points and appreciate the language. Besides, a teacher must instruct students to acquire some skills concerning reading efficiently and inspire them to talk more about their new school life, especially their new problems and solutions both at school and in life.【教學目標與核心素養(yǎng)】1. Enable students to acquire the basic usage of the new words and expressions concerning the freshmen challenges and learn to use them flexibly.2. Enable students to have a good understanding of the freshmen challenges in the new senior high school which is quite different from junior middle school.3. Develop students’ sense of cooperative learning and individual thinking capability. 4. Develop students’ different learning skills to solve different reading comprehensive problems.
【教材分析】This teaching period mainly deals with reading for writing a letter of advice. Students are expected to learn the knowledge about how to write a suggestion letter. The teacher is expected to enable students to master some writing skills concerning suggestion letters and learn to write one.【教學目標與核心素養(yǎng)】1. Get students to have a good understanding of how to write a suggestion letter properly.2. Enable students to use some writing skills flexibly.3. Develop students’ writing and cooperating abilities.4. Strengthen students’ great interest in writing discourses.【教學重難點】1. How to enable students to have a good understanding of the skills of writing a suggestion letter2.How to enable students to write a good recommendation letter using some writing skills properly.【教學過程】Step 1: Lead in Begin the class with the lead-in questions: how to write a letter for advice? What kinds of aspects should be included? It is strongly recommended that the teacher should ask students to discuss the topic freely with their partners and brainstorm some ideas concerning the topic. In this way, students can come up with more ideas and avoid being nervous at the beginning of the class.Step 2: Read to discover details concerning advice letters’ writing style.The teacher is expected to ask students to read a letter offering some advice on page 18 silently and then request students to discuss the questions below.
(5)be to do (可以和具體的時間狀語連用)①表示按計劃、安排即將發(fā)生的動作。②用于時間、條件狀語從句中,表示“如果要……,想要……”。The students are to meet at the school gate tomorrow. 明天學生們將在學校大門口集會。 If you are to succeed, you must work as hard as possible. 如果你想要成功,比必須努力工作。(6)be about to do (不與具體的時間狀語連用) 表示即將要發(fā)生的動作。We are about to start. 我們就要出發(fā)了。The new school year is about to begin. 新學年開學在即。(7)一般現(xiàn)在時表將來①表示按時間表規(guī)定將要發(fā)生的動作。常限于表示位置移動的短暫性動詞。②在時間、條件或讓步狀語從句中,用一般現(xiàn)在時表將來。Look at the timetable. Hurry up! Flight 4026 takes off at 18:20. 你看看時刻表,快點!4026次航班的起飛時間是下午6點20分。Jane is in a hurry because the train to the airport leaves in half an hour. 簡很匆忙,因為去機場的火車半小時后出發(fā)。
無論她說什么都不會對我們的安排有影響。Answers: for, arrangement3) Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success.父母為孩子安排好一切,不遺余力地為他們的成功鋪路。4. extremely adv 極其,非常extreme adj 非常的1) Mary found it extremely difficult to get a job.2) I’m extremely sorry to have troubled you.Answers:瑪麗發(fā)現(xiàn)找工作極其困難。給你添了麻煩,我十分抱歉。3) It had white-painted tunnels and bright red carriages, and proved _________ (extreme) popular with the public.它有白色的隧道和明亮的紅色車廂,結果證明它非常受大眾的歡迎。Answers: extremelyExercises1. I am continuing to apply_______ jobs though I have failed several times.2. All this had an _______ (extremely) bad effect on the criminal justice system.3. The invention would have wide ______ (apply) in industry.4. She’s happy with her unusual living _________ (arrange).5. I was banging so loudly that I’m ___________ (amaze) that they didn’t hear me.6. You haven’t changed at all you still look ___________ (exact) the same.7. “Was it what you expected?” “Yes, _________ (definite).”8. He was looking forward to______ (work) with the newPrime Minister. Answers: for extreme application arrangement amazed exactly definitely looking單句寫作:1. _______________ (你要說些什么) when you get on the platform to accept the reward?2. Since_____________________(我們?yōu)檫@些事情做好了準備), we have nothing to worry about.
Good expressions that students can choose to use: help the travelers choose which tour to take1. In my opinion, you could/might choose…, because you prefer to…2. …could be a perfect choice for you, for…3. As far as I am concerned, you would enjoy…, for…4. …would probably suit you, because you enjoy/love/hate doing…Step 5 Passage ConsolidationLanguage appreciation:1. You can then spend three days exploring the rainforest with a local guide and enjoying the plants and animals unique to the rainforest. 在接下來的三天里,您可以在當?shù)貙в蔚呐阃拢钊胗炅诌M行探索,欣賞雨林特有的動植物。本句主體結構為spend some time doing sth. 2. Inca builders cut stones to exact sizes so that nothing was needed to hold walls together other than the perfect fit of the stones. 印加的建筑工人將石頭切割成精確的尺寸,僅僅憑著石頭間的完美契合,即可穩(wěn)固墻體。本句為so that引導的結果狀語從句。nothing與the perfect fit為并列成分; other than在句中意為“除了”。Step 6 HomeworkSuppose you will travel to Peru, write a short essay about your three-day tour plan.
2. Sort out detailed information about Michael Jordan.(1) Understand the transitional sentence.Q: Which part is about Michael Jordan as a master? Which part is about the example he set?(2) Have the Ss Focus on why Michael Jordan is a master and what good examples Michael Jordan set when they’re reading. And think about these questions as below:Q1: How does the author describe his impressive skills?Q2: How do you understand “time seemed to stand still”?Q3: What does “graceful” mean?Q4. Which sentence do you think best describes his mental strength?Q5. Which words is important in the sentence in describing his mental strength? Why?Q6: How do you understand “unique”?Q7: What can we learn from Michael Jordan?Step 5 Discussing and recommendingRecommend their own living legends of sports.Work in groups to choose your own living legend of sports and give the reasons of your choice. Step 6 HomeworkReview the stories of Lang Ping and Michael Jordan, and try to retell them.
Then have them write a short paragraph to describe and explain their changes. After that, get the Ss to exchange their drafts with their partners and use the checklist to give feedback on their drafts, and finally revise it.Step 5 Summary of how to write a wellness book1.健康書的審題步驟:第一步:明確要求該寫作屬于經驗分享,故要用第一人稱來寫;時態(tài)以一股現(xiàn)在時為主。第二步:確定段落該類文章可以從以下三個方面人手:Para.1首先表明寫作的目的Para.2自己的做法及心得體會Para.3表示期望及感謝第三步:提煉要點2.健康書常見句式:1) It is an honor for me to share my favorite sport with you,2) It makes me feel relaxed playing with my friends.3) It makes me rid myself of stress while playing with my friends.4) Moreover, it provides me a valuable chance to communicate with others.5) I we eat too little or too much, or if we choose the wrong food, we may become sick.6) We can do something to change the poor situation.Step 6Homework假如你的老師讓你在班級Wellness Bok上分享自己的親身經歷及心得,請根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇80字左右的文章1. 你喜歡的運動是什么?2. 你最喜歡的原因是什么?3. 你參加鍛煉的體會。
①標題——標題應當簡潔明了。②導語——導語是消息開頭的第一段或第一句話,簡明扼要地揭示出消息的核心內容。③主體——主體是消息的主要部分,要用充足的事實表現(xiàn)主題,對導語的內容作進一步的展開和闡述。④結束語——通常是對全文內容進行概括性的總結。3. 新聞報道增分句子(1)陳述事實常用的句型:①A terrible storm hit/struck ... , killing ..②It was a cool autumn night when the earthquake happened. A large number of buildings fell down and roads were destroyed, leaving a great many people homeless.地震發(fā)生在一個涼爽的秋夜。大量的建筑物倒塌,道路被毀,許多人無家可歸。③With the help of the rescue team, people who were the trapped in the flood were saved.在救援隊的幫助下,困在洪水中的人們得救了。(2)陳述觀點常用的句型:①Clearly/Obviously/In my opinion/It seemed that people were shocked.顯然/在我看來/似乎人們震驚了。②The whole city was in ruins after the earthquake.地震后整個城市成了一片廢墟。(3)揭示原因常用的句型:Because of/As a result of/Thanks to the help of the army, people who got injured were sent to the hospital immediately.
【教材分析】This teaching period mainly deals with the grammar: the restrictive relative clauses.This period carries considerable significance to the cultivation of students’ writing competence and lays a solid foundation for the basic appreciation of language beauty. The teacher is expected to enable students to master this period thoroughly and consolidate the knowledge by doing some exercise of good quality.【教學目標與核心素養(yǎng)】1. Get students to have a good understanding of the basic usages of the restrictive relative clauses.2. Enable students to use the restrictive relative clauses flexibly.3. Develop students’ speaking and cooperating abilities.4. Strengthen students’ great interest in grammar learning.【教學重難點】How to enable students to have a good understanding of the restrictive relative clauses, especially the uses of the relative words such as which, that, who, whom.【教學過程】Step1: 語法知識呈現(xiàn)定語從句(一)—關系代詞的用法在復合句中, 修飾名詞或代詞的從句叫定語從句。定語從句通常由關系代詞或關系副詞引導,說明事物的具體信息,從句位于被修飾詞之后。被定語從句修飾的詞叫先行詞,引導定語從句的詞叫關系詞,關系詞指代先行詞,并在定語從句中充當成分。關系詞有兩種:關系代詞who, whom ,whose, that, which, as和關系副詞when, where, why。
II Learn the technical terms-2.1. What can be used as “Subject, Object, Predicative, Direct Object, Indirect Object and objective complement” in a sentence?2. What can be used as “adverbial” in a sentence?3. What can be used as “verb” in a sentence?Answers to questions 1-3:1. Nouns, pronouns and appellations can be used as “Subject, Object, Predicative, Direct Object, Indirect Object and Objective Complement”. Besides, adjectives can be used as “Predicative and Objective Complement” in a sentence.2. Adverbs and prepositional phrases can be used as “Adverbial”.3. Verbs with actual meaning can be used as “Verb” in a sentence. Auxiliary verbs alone cannot be used as “Verb” in a sentence.III Learn to recognize the sentence structures.1. SV structure. For Example:(1) A bird flies.S V(2) A monkey jumps.S V(3) A fish swims.S V√ In SV structures, verbs are “intransitive verbs”.2. SVO structure. For Example:(1) A sheep eats grass.S V O(2) They like bananas.S V O(3) He wants candy.S V O√ In SVO structures, verbs are “transitive verbs”.3. SP structure. For Example:(1) This is great.S P (2) He looks well.S P (3) She became a teacher.S P √ In SP structures, Predicatives are formed by “l(fā)ink verbs” and “adjectives or nouns”.√ link verbs: be, become, grow, look, feel, taste, etc.4. SV IO DO structure. For Example:(1) He asked me a question.S V IO DO(2) Danny wrote me a letter.S V IO DO(3) Billy brought Sam a kite.S V IO DO√ In SV IO DO structures, the verbs are transitive and are followed by two objectives – pronouns or nouns as Indirect Objective, and nouns as Direct Objectives.
5. Read to get detailed information about Paragraph 5.Q1. What shows the revival of Tangshan?Q2. How can Tangshan revive itself and get up on its feet again?Q3. In times of disasters, how can we go through it?T: In times of disasters, we should unify, show the wisdom and stay positive.Step 4 Activity 4 Highlighting the theme and reflecting1. Make a summary of the text.2. Further understand the titleQ: After our learning, why do you think the earth didn’t sleep on that night?T: An earthquake happened. The people in the earthquake suffered a lot, and the people outside Tangshan were concerned about the people there a lot.3. Reflect through discussion on what can be learnt after reading.T: Disasters are powerful. Unpreparedness can be deadly. Life is weak, but if people work together to help each other, disasters can be defeated.There is no love from disaster, but we have love in the human heart.Step 5 Assignment How does the writer convey that the earthquake was deadly, and that people were helpless during the earthquake? Try to find some attractive and impressive expressions and note them down.