四、總結(jié)歸納,延伸拓展師:作者“觀古今于須臾,撫四海于一瞬”,把時(shí)間的概念,從人們?nèi)粘5母杏X延伸到自然界中,引出了關(guān)于時(shí)間的又一種境界。請(qǐng)同學(xué)們根據(jù)你所知道的課內(nèi)外知識(shí),完成下面的拓展任務(wù):拓展任務(wù)一巖石記錄時(shí)間的重要方式是它保存了許多的歷史痕跡。請(qǐng)閱讀課文第22—29段并分組討論,說(shuō)說(shuō)巖石保存了哪些歷史痕跡,它對(duì)人類有著怎樣的意義,你從中得到了哪些啟示。 (生分小組探討,批注,然后交流回答)預(yù)設(shè) 示例:①記錄了地殼的活動(dòng);②記錄了氣候的變化;③記錄了古代生物的狀況;④記錄了地球歷史的發(fā)展過(guò)程;⑤記錄了自然界某些轉(zhuǎn)瞬即逝的活動(dòng)。意義與啟示:對(duì)巖石的研究,不僅使我們?cè)鲩L(zhǎng)了知識(shí),對(duì)自然界與史前歷史有了更多的認(rèn)識(shí),還使我們擁有了開發(fā)史前資源的可能性,能為人類謀取幸福。我們要秉承這種辯證主義思想觀念,發(fā)揚(yáng)科學(xué)探索的精神,在人類前行的歷史上,貢獻(xiàn)出一份力量。
【初讀課文,整體感知】1. 以《時(shí)間的腳印》為題目有什么好處?文章的題目《時(shí)間的腳印》,是從高士其《時(shí)間伯伯》一詩(shī)中引申借用來(lái)的。其擬人化手法的運(yùn)用,形象地說(shuō)明了那些形形色色、大大小小的巖石中都潛藏著時(shí)間的蹤影,以引起人們的探究欲望和閱讀興趣?!驹僮x課文,梳理結(jié)構(gòu)】1.第一部分(第1至第4自然段)說(shuō)明巖石“是記錄時(shí)間的方式中最重要的一種”。2.第二部分(第5至第29自然段)分層次地詳細(xì)說(shuō)明巖石是怎樣記錄時(shí)間的。這部分分三層。3.第三部分(第30自然段至全文完)總結(jié)全文,說(shuō)明巖石記錄時(shí)間的意義,號(hào)召人們進(jìn)一步去大自然找尋時(shí)間的蹤影,去一步步走向地下的寶庫(kù)?!靖形蚓示渥印?.“狂風(fēng)來(lái)了,洪水來(lái)了,冰河爬來(lái)了”。
【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】學(xué)習(xí)事理說(shuō)明文,要讓學(xué)生在自主歸納的過(guò)程中,初步感知事理說(shuō)明文說(shuō)明“事理”這一基本特點(diǎn),把握事理說(shuō)明文和事物說(shuō)明文的不同之處。引導(dǎo)學(xué)生通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)課文,對(duì)科學(xué)方法產(chǎn)生自己的體會(huì),并運(yùn)用到自己的思考中。四、總結(jié)存儲(chǔ)1.教師小結(jié)本文是一篇事理說(shuō)明文,作者把一門科學(xué)——物候?qū)W介紹得淺顯易懂,饒有趣味。全文采用邏輯順序說(shuō)明,思路清晰明了:描述物候現(xiàn)象——做出科學(xué)解釋——追究因果關(guān)系——闡述研究意義。這種從現(xiàn)象到本質(zhì)的認(rèn)識(shí)方法和行文思路值得我們學(xué)習(xí)。本文語(yǔ)言嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)而生動(dòng),兼具說(shuō)明的科學(xué)性和生動(dòng)性,是一篇極有價(jià)值的科普文,是科學(xué)家竺可楨科學(xué)精神和科學(xué)思想的具體體現(xiàn)。文章啟發(fā)我們:科學(xué)距離我們并不遙遠(yuǎn),就在我們的身邊,而想要探索它,就要有科學(xué)精神,擴(kuò)大科學(xué)知識(shí)儲(chǔ)備,掌握科學(xué)方法,勇于探索科學(xué)奧秘。
結(jié)束這節(jié)課,我心里很輕松,因?yàn)樵谝酝慕虒W(xué)中學(xué)生感覺到:說(shuō)明文很單調(diào)、枯燥不生動(dòng)。而本節(jié)課學(xué)生與我配合得非常好,原因是我利用多媒體展示的幾幅畫面,把學(xué)生的注意力都集中在所講的內(nèi)容中,并且調(diào)動(dòng)了學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的積極性,認(rèn)為物候現(xiàn)象就在我們的身邊,激發(fā)學(xué)生探索科學(xué)奧秘的興趣,更多地去了解大自然,認(rèn)識(shí)大自然,熱愛大自然。在初讀課文的時(shí)候,我訓(xùn)練了學(xué)生的概括能力;在分清舉例說(shuō)明的方法時(shí),讓學(xué)生明白什么是舉例子的說(shuō)明方法;在細(xì)讀課文的時(shí)候,讓學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)生動(dòng)地有條理地說(shuō)明事物的方法,還重點(diǎn)品味第一段的生動(dòng)語(yǔ)言,在品味說(shuō)明文語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性時(shí),有日常生活中的例子導(dǎo)入,深入淺出地講解了說(shuō)明語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的兩點(diǎn)情況。
教后反思本節(jié)課給學(xué)生創(chuàng)設(shè)了良好的活動(dòng)空間,把學(xué)生實(shí)際生活中聽說(shuō)過(guò)的見到的平均分現(xiàn)象展示給學(xué)生看,把生活和數(shù)學(xué)聯(lián)系起來(lái),在學(xué)生感受“同樣多”的基礎(chǔ)上概括出什么叫平均分。揭示平均分這一數(shù)學(xué)知識(shí)在生活中的應(yīng)用,之后突出了學(xué)生三次實(shí)際操作。第一次,小組同學(xué)互相分水果,重視學(xué)生分的結(jié)果。體會(huì)感受“平均分”的含義。第二次,重視分法:15個(gè)橘子平均分成5份。體現(xiàn)了學(xué)生對(duì)物品的不同分法,建立了平均分的概念。第三次,分礦泉水,通過(guò)份數(shù)變化,觀察分的就結(jié)果,深刻體會(huì)“平均分”,為認(rèn)識(shí)除法積累豐富的知識(shí)。為學(xué)生營(yíng)造探索的空間。第二課時(shí):平均分的認(rèn)識(shí)(二)教學(xué)內(nèi)容鞏固“平均分”。課本第15頁(yè)的例題3。教學(xué)目標(biāo)1.鞏固“平均分”的概念,知道平均分就是每一份分得結(jié)果同樣多。
三維目標(biāo)1.知識(shí)與技能(1)讓學(xué)生經(jīng)歷用7、8、9的乘法口訣求商的過(guò)程,掌握用乘法口訣求商的一般方法。(2)使學(xué)生會(huì)綜合應(yīng)用乘、除法運(yùn)算解決簡(jiǎn)單的或稍復(fù)雜的實(shí)際問(wèn)題。2.過(guò)程與方法在解決問(wèn)題的過(guò)程中,讓學(xué)生初步嘗試運(yùn)用分析、推理和轉(zhuǎn)化的學(xué)習(xí)方法。3.情感、態(tài)度與價(jià)值觀讓學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)中體驗(yàn)到成功的喜悅,增強(qiáng)學(xué)生學(xué)好數(shù)學(xué)的信心。重、難點(diǎn)與關(guān)鍵1.重點(diǎn):使學(xué)生熟練應(yīng)用乘法口訣求商,經(jīng)歷從實(shí)際問(wèn)題中抽象出一個(gè)數(shù)是另一個(gè)數(shù)的幾倍的數(shù)量關(guān)系的過(guò)程,會(huì)用乘法口訣求商的技能解決實(shí)際問(wèn)題。2.難點(diǎn):應(yīng)用分析推理將一個(gè)數(shù)是另一個(gè)數(shù)的幾倍是多少的數(shù)量關(guān)系轉(zhuǎn)化為一個(gè)數(shù)里面有幾個(gè)另一個(gè)數(shù)的除法含義。3.關(guān)鍵:以解決問(wèn)題為載體,培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的數(shù)感。
所需要用到的句子:Who is that?That is Jack. I like him.Why do you like him?I like him because he is interesting.Task 4: 設(shè)計(jì)理想中的人類Step one: 設(shè)計(jì)理想中的人類的外貌。把全班同學(xué)分成若干小組,學(xué)生可以邊說(shuō)邊在紙上畫出他們的模樣。Step two: 設(shè)計(jì)理想中人類的性格。學(xué)生們可以把那些能描述性格的單詞寫在圖畫的旁邊。Step three: 每組選出一名同學(xué),其他同組同學(xué)提問(wèn),他作簡(jiǎn)單回答,并說(shuō)明原因。所需用到的句子:What does he or she look like?He or she ...What is he or she like?He or she is ...Why?Because ...Task 5: 挑戰(zhàn)性活動(dòng)調(diào)查性格是天生的還是后天形成的,讓每個(gè)同學(xué)回家去調(diào)查一下自己成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中性格是否有變化,具體是怎樣的,為什么會(huì)這樣? Teaching Aims:1. Enable students to have a general understanding of how to talk about people's physical appearance.2. Enable students to tackle some essential vocabularies and patterns about describing people. Provide them with necessary skills and methods.3. Create various chances for students to describe the persons they're familiar with, such as classmates, family members, teachers, idols, etc.
Don’t fight. =You can’t fight. (板書,教讀)教師把這些句子板書在黑板上,并請(qǐng)學(xué)生大聲整齊地讀祈使句和“can’t”句型,并讓學(xué)生注意兩種句型表達(dá)形式的不同和轉(zhuǎn)換,“Don’t …=You can’t…”;并對(duì)學(xué)生說(shuō):These are our school rules. (板書,教讀) You can’t break the school rules. Don’t break the school rules.(板書,教讀)步驟3 :Practicea. T: Now, each of the students is breaking one of these rules.Please finish 1a.學(xué)生看圖,完成1a的內(nèi)容,檢查答案并大聲朗讀校規(guī)。b. 聽錄音,完成1b,選出四位學(xué)生都違反了哪條校規(guī);聽之前,學(xué)生要讀會(huì)英文名。c. 請(qǐng)兩位學(xué)生朗讀1c部分的句型;要求學(xué)生兩人一組對(duì)話表演,SA扮演外校轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)新生,SB告知本校校規(guī)。(學(xué)生可經(jīng)過(guò)討論,多說(shuō)出他們想到的校規(guī),不必只限于書上;教師應(yīng)給予幫助)2) 第二課時(shí)(2a~4)步驟1 :warming up of revisionT: What are the rules at your school?學(xué)生使用“can”或祈使句表達(dá)各條校規(guī);其中老師可引出“eat in the cafeteria outside”的表達(dá)。步驟2 :Practicea.T: Christina is an exchange student. She doesn’t know the rules. Let’s listen, what activities they’re talking about?學(xué)生聽第一遍時(shí),完成2a;第二遍時(shí),完成2b;b. 請(qǐng)學(xué)生領(lǐng)讀2c部分,看著2a完成的表格,理解2c活動(dòng)的要求;分成小組針對(duì)2a進(jìn)行問(wèn)答;
教學(xué)過(guò)程Step 1: warming-up Sing a song---------“food and drink” Step 2: Revision1 Dictation2 Revise: What kind of noodles would you like?I’d like …What size bowl of noodles would you like?I’d like…Step 3: Presentation1 show pictures of food, ask students say the words.2 Students read the newspaper ad in 3a. Fill in blanks with words in the box. Then read the ad together, the teacher explains some difficult language points.3 Check the answers Step 4 PracticeAsk students to finish 3b in the same way according to 3a. Students read the short passage and fill in the blanks .At last, check the answers.Step 5 productionAsk students to write their own ad for dumplings, noodles, drinks, and other foods they know. Then ask students to read their partner’s ad. Then order food and drink from their partner.Step 6 Home workGroup work – make an ad about “food and drink”
1 Each group choose one place to describe and what you are doing in it Choose one place, and describe what they are doing 2 Move around the room and give suggestions Talk about it and write it down 3 Ask one to show their works and act it Choose one of each group to make a report 4 Evaluate the best group and the best reporter Choose the best one Homework Ask your friends their ideal place and write about it教學(xué)反思:新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)生在課堂中的主體地位,在綜合課中他們的主體地位就更加突出。在各個(gè)活動(dòng)中給不同程度的學(xué)生不同層次的任務(wù),讓各層面的學(xué)生都有表現(xiàn)發(fā)揮的機(jī)會(huì),從而產(chǎn)生對(duì)英語(yǔ)的興趣。使用照片圖片多媒體來(lái)輔助教學(xué),效果更好。同時(shí)讓了解其他國(guó)家風(fēng)景,風(fēng)俗的同學(xué)介紹ideal place,增加學(xué)生的背景知知識(shí),實(shí)現(xiàn)跨學(xué)科交流的目的。教案點(diǎn)評(píng):采用任務(wù)型教學(xué)模式,在各個(gè)活動(dòng)中給不同程度的學(xué)生不同層次的任務(wù),讓各層面的學(xué)生都有表現(xiàn)發(fā)揮的機(jī)會(huì),從而產(chǎn)生對(duì)英語(yǔ)的興趣。使用照片圖片多媒體來(lái)輔助教學(xué),效果更好。讓了解其他國(guó)家風(fēng)景,風(fēng)俗的同學(xué)介紹ideal place,增加學(xué)生的背景知識(shí),實(shí)現(xiàn)跨學(xué)科交流的目的。
五、教學(xué)Section B-2c1. Pair work: What do you think of the belt/sunglasses/…? What does your father/mother/… think of your scarf/belt…?2. Group work(1). Teacher shows some different kinds of school uniforms (制服)and asks : “ What do you think of your school uniforms? If you have a chance to choose your school uniforms, what kind would you like to choose?”(2). Discuss in groups.(3).Get some Ss to report in class.說(shuō)明:這一步旨在讓學(xué)生運(yùn)用已有的語(yǔ)言知識(shí)談?wù)搶?duì)事物的看法和意見,并簡(jiǎn)單闡明理由,培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的主動(dòng)思維能力和運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)的能力。六、教學(xué)拓展調(diào)查電視節(jié)目的收視率任務(wù):調(diào)查你周圍的人對(duì)現(xiàn)在各種電視節(jié)目的反響。活動(dòng)過(guò)程:1.教師布置任務(wù),讓學(xué)生調(diào)查周圍的人(包括他的親戚朋友和鄰居)喜歡收看哪方面的電視節(jié)目。2.學(xué)生進(jìn)行調(diào)查活動(dòng),運(yùn)用本單元所學(xué)的句型What do you think of….? (Why?)What's your favorite game shows?What do you think of talk show?I doesn’t mind it.I like it.I love it.I can’t stand it.3.記錄下排在前10位的TV Program,填寫調(diào)查表,比較其收視率。
句型: Where did you go on vacation? I went to summer camp.Did she go to Central Park?Yes,she did.No, she didn’t語(yǔ)法:一般過(guò)去時(shí)特殊疑問(wèn)句、一般疑問(wèn)句及肯、否定回答。課時(shí)安排4課時(shí)第一課時(shí):Section A:la,1b,lc,2a,2b,2c 第二課時(shí):Section A:3a,3b,4第三課時(shí):Section B:1,2a,2b,2c第四課時(shí):Section B:3a,3b,3c,4 and Self Check第一課時(shí)教學(xué)目標(biāo)掌握描寫假期生活的形容詞。假期里自己所做事情的簡(jiǎn)單表達(dá)。談?wù)摷倨谧龅氖虑榧爱?dāng)時(shí)情況。談?wù)摷倨跁r(shí)旅游的天氣,旅游者以及食物等。教學(xué)過(guò)程一、導(dǎo)入播放一首英文歌曲:Let’s travel 說(shuō)明:通過(guò)讓學(xué)生聽節(jié)奏歡快迪斯尼英語(yǔ)歌曲Let’s travel.引入本節(jié)課談?wù)摰脑掝}vacation and travel. 讓歌曲使學(xué)生的思維活躍,增強(qiáng)課堂氣氛,激發(fā)學(xué)生提高學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的興趣。T:How is the trip ?Ss : It’s pretty good/ happy/exciting /relaxing/busy/dangerous/ fantastic說(shuō)明:這個(gè)問(wèn)題是為了操練形容詞。建議讓多個(gè)Ss作答。鼓勵(lì)他們用不同的形容詞。上述個(gè)別形容詞本應(yīng)在第二課時(shí)中出現(xiàn),但可以在warming-up中第一次非正式出現(xiàn)。這些形容詞也可在老師的評(píng)價(jià)語(yǔ)中適時(shí)出現(xiàn),以加深學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯的印象。
單元整體說(shuō)明(一)單元教材分析本單元的核心話題是描述動(dòng)物和表達(dá)個(gè)人喜好,以及句式why do you like…? Because…。這也是本單元的教學(xué)重點(diǎn)。通過(guò)本單元的學(xué)習(xí),學(xué)生應(yīng)能較流利地運(yùn)用所學(xué)詞匯和句型描述動(dòng)物,表達(dá)個(gè)人喜好。(二)單元知識(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)1.詞匯動(dòng)物名稱 tiger, elephant, koala, dolphin, etc.詞匯描述性形容詞: smart, cute, ugly, clever, shy, etc.國(guó)家名: Australia, South Africa2.句型Why do you like koala hears? Because they are cute.Where are pandas from? They're from China.What animals do you like? I like dolphins.(三)單元整體目標(biāo)1.Master the vocabulary2.Master and use: Why do you like koalas? Because they am cute.Where are pandas from? They're from China.What animals do you like? I like dolphins.(四)單元教學(xué)重難點(diǎn)一覽(五)單元學(xué)情分析學(xué)生此前已經(jīng)學(xué)過(guò)由why, where, what 引導(dǎo)的特殊疑問(wèn)句句型,具有了學(xué)習(xí)本單元知識(shí)的認(rèn)知前提。形形色色的動(dòng)物能激發(fā)學(xué)生的好奇心,產(chǎn)生了解它們的欲望,這有利于本單元知識(shí)的教學(xué)和學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)興趣的培養(yǎng)。
Teaching Goal:1. General aims:Talk about recent past events2. Particular aims:A. Language Focus.Talk about recent past events and think of the past events.B. Language goalsHow was….?It was …What did …do over the weekend?C. Language structures:(1). How was your weekend? I was great. Pay attention to no form.(2). What did you do over the weekend? I played soccer. We went to the beach.D. Useful words and phrases:Words: was, did, went, beach, over, project, test, wasn’t, false, number, geography, spend, week, most, mixture, their, had, little, cook, read, saw, change, everyone, sit, sat, no, anythingPhrases: did one’s homework, played soccer, cleaned my room, went to the beach, played tennis, went to the movies, on Saturday morning, over the weekend, cook … for, what about, do some reading, have a party, talk show, go shoppingE. Grammar language:Present simple past tenseRegular and irregular verbsF. Learning strategies:Tour and holidaysG. Interdiscipinary:H. Emotion and manner:Teaching time: 5 periodsTeaching procedures:Period One教學(xué)步驟、時(shí)間 教師活動(dòng) 學(xué)生活動(dòng) 媒體應(yīng)用Step 1Free talk 3’ Ask some questions like:Who’s on duty today?What’s the weather like? Answer and talk about something.讓同學(xué)們回答下列問(wèn)題1. Do you like weekend? (Let some students answer)It takes them three minutes to talk about the question.2. Why do you like weekend? (let the students answer) Most of the students like the weekend此時(shí)教師用漢語(yǔ)問(wèn):“在周末期間問(wèn)你干了什么?這句話用英語(yǔ)這么回答?Let the students guess.At last the teacher give them right answer3. What did you do over the weekend?(板書、學(xué)習(xí))
Period 2 (3a----Section B 2c)Preview(Pre-task): Key points: What laAdd another information about their pen pals----their language on the cardnguage does she/he speak?She/He speaks....Does she/he have any brothers and sisters? Does she/he speak English?Preview(Pre-task): Add another information about their pen pals----their language on the cardKey points: What language does she/he speak?She/He speaks....Does she/he have any brothers and sisters? Does she/he speak English?Step 1 Revision1.Revisionand dictation of the new words 2.Revise the drills they learned yesterday.(by pairwork and grammar exercise)Step 2 Leading-inT has a conversation with one student. The conversation is following:---Do you have a pen pal?---Yes, I do.---What's your pen pal's name? ---His/Her name is....---Where is your pen pal from? ---He/She is from...---Where does he/she live? ---He/She lives in....---What language does he/she speak?He/She speaks...Write the new words on the Bb. They are following: EnglishChineseJapaneseFrenchStep 3 LearnLearn the new words with the whole class.Finish 3a with the students3b Pairwork T still does an example with one student Then the Ss practise in pairs. The example is following:--Curry Muray is my pen pal. He is from the United States.---What language does he speak?
三、教學(xué)建議第一課時(shí):1. Lead in (Vocabulary)A) Before class, teacher should collect some pictures of working places. For example: Bank, TV Station, Restaurant, Police Station, Hospital ...B) In class, show students the pictures (PowerPoint, OHP). Ask students to tell the name of the working places and the name of the jobs.Shop assistant, doctor, actor, reporter, police office, waiter, bank clerk, studentC) Do exercise 1a and 3a.2. Bingo GameAsk groups of students to make up pairs of cards with a job on one and the related workplace on the other. For example, waiter / restaurant, teacher / school, doctor / hospital. Encourage students to use both the job / workplace combinations in the book and the ones that students came up during class discussions. Be sure they have twice as many sets of cards as there are students in the group. They can make two sets of cards for a single job / workplace, if necessary. Then have each group mix up its set of cards and hand their cards out in random order. Each time a student gets a pair of cards that match, he or she can lay these cards down. The goal is to have no cards in your hand at the end.3. Task OneA) Ask students to work in pairs and ask the partner what does he / she want to be in the future.e. g. :What do you / does he / does she want to be?I want to be a.Why?Because it's (adj).B) Vocabulary: Section B, 1a4. Homework 1.2.
2.1Match the country with the language.Step II Reading3a? let the students read the letter fast and answer the questions.? Let the students ask more questions about the letter as possible as the can.Step III Writing3b.Step IV. Pairwork2cStep V Listening2a, 2bStep V. HomeworkExercises book(1) P3Exercises book (2) P3Period FourStep I . Dictate the words and sentences in Unit1.Step II. Self-checkStep III. Check the answers for Exercises book in the unit.Step IV. Home workRevise and preparation for unit 2.教學(xué)反思:通過(guò)本單元的學(xué)習(xí),學(xué)生基本可以談?wù)撊藗兊膰?guó)籍,居住城市及其所說(shuō)的語(yǔ)言,通過(guò)書信方式去介紹自己并尋找筆友。但在涉及到國(guó)外的一些城市時(shí),學(xué)生對(duì)這方面的知識(shí)相對(duì)欠缺,能介紹的城市并不多,也反應(yīng)出學(xué)生課前預(yù)習(xí)不充分,這跟學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)條件也有關(guān),大多數(shù)學(xué)生無(wú)法通過(guò)網(wǎng)絡(luò)獲取所需信息。因此,在以后的教學(xué)中要多指導(dǎo)學(xué)生通過(guò)計(jì)算機(jī)網(wǎng)絡(luò)獲取信息,拓寬知識(shí)面。
五、細(xì)讀詩(shī)歌,明確寫法1.明確文章寫法。這首詩(shī)中詩(shī)人描寫的是自然界的道路,但是同時(shí)又暗含著詩(shī)人對(duì)人生之路的思考。這首詩(shī)中的這種寫法與《假如生活欺騙了你》中的寫法一樣嗎?為什么?預(yù)設(shè) 不一樣。這首詩(shī)中詩(shī)人運(yùn)用了大量形象闡釋哲理,運(yùn)用了許多詠物詩(shī)、哲理詩(shī)采用的象征手法,耐人尋味。對(duì)詩(shī)歌創(chuàng)作,弗羅斯特有獨(dú)具一格的方法與原則,他認(rèn)為詩(shī)歌應(yīng)“始于愉悅,終于智慧”,應(yīng)該給人以美的享受和思想上的啟迪。從以上的學(xué)習(xí)中我們可以看出,詩(shī)人弗羅斯特用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)言、豐富的象征,巧妙地將自己對(duì)社會(huì)、自然、人生的了解和思考融入豐富的詩(shī)歌形象之中,運(yùn)用人們熟悉又帶有神秘色彩的自然場(chǎng)景,向人們闡釋人生哲理,向人們展示他理解的人生,以及他對(duì)人生、對(duì)社會(huì)的探索。2.了解象征手法。象征是詩(shī)歌創(chuàng)作中經(jīng)常運(yùn)用的一種寫作方法,詩(shī)歌一般都會(huì)通過(guò)一定的藝術(shù)形象,生動(dòng)鮮明地將主題含蓄地表達(dá)出來(lái)。
二、升格訓(xùn)練師:大文豪曹雪芹寫《紅樓夢(mèng)》是“披閱十載,增刪五次”,可見修改是寫作獲得成功的必然環(huán)節(jié),很多文學(xué)名家對(duì)此也深有感觸。這些古今中外的作家,都向我們推薦了一種修改文章的好方法——朗讀修改法。結(jié)合你自己的寫作經(jīng)驗(yàn),你覺得大聲朗讀可以發(fā)現(xiàn)習(xí)作中的哪些問(wèn)題?預(yù)設(shè) 如有些詞語(yǔ)聽起來(lái)不順耳,有些句子讀起來(lái)不順口,有些段落缺少過(guò)渡,或前后意思重復(fù),有些地方表達(dá)不清楚,有些修辭手法的運(yùn)用欠妥,有些標(biāo)點(diǎn)的運(yùn)用不規(guī)范等,這些問(wèn)題都能夠在朗讀中發(fā)現(xiàn)。2.再改隨筆。師:之前修改寫景隨筆,用的是默讀修改法,這次換作朗讀修改法,會(huì)不會(huì)有新的收獲呢?請(qǐng)大家朗讀病文,然后小組討論:文中還有哪些用詞不恰當(dāng)、語(yǔ)句不連貫的地方,找出來(lái)并進(jìn)行修改,使之文從字順。(生朗讀隨筆,修改后交流討論并展示)預(yù)設(shè) (1)“有什么輕柔的東西拂到臉上,細(xì)細(xì)的”,可以把“輕柔的”改成疊詞“柔柔的”,放到后面,和“細(xì)細(xì)的”并列,這樣讀起來(lái)音律感要好些。
預(yù)設(shè) 可能仍然有人在照料。雖然時(shí)代在變,然而雷鋒精神并未消失。新時(shí)代涌現(xiàn)出許多熱心善良、樂(lè)于助人、見義勇為、默默奉獻(xiàn)的人,他們繼續(xù)發(fā)揚(yáng)著為人民服務(wù)的雷鋒精神,他們的行為也表明了雷鋒精神在代代相傳,并發(fā)揚(yáng)光大!社會(huì)因?yàn)樗麄兊膼坌摹⑸婆e而變得溫暖、和諧!2.作為新時(shí)代的中學(xué)生,我們?cè)撊绾伟l(fā)揚(yáng)雷鋒精神?預(yù)設(shè) 時(shí)代需要雷鋒精神,或許我們做不到像雷鋒那樣高尚,但我們可以做一些力所能及的事情,如公交車上給老人和孕婦讓座,公共場(chǎng)合保持安靜不大聲喧嘩,外出游玩遵守規(guī)則,遇到別人有困難,及時(shí)予以幫助等。從身邊的小事端正自己的行為,自覺維護(hù)社會(huì)的公德,樂(lè)于助人、甘于奉獻(xiàn),才能共建和諧社會(huì)?!驹O(shè)計(jì)意圖】此環(huán)節(jié)旨在通過(guò)閱讀材料讓學(xué)生明白雷鋒精神一直在傳承和發(fā)揚(yáng),并引導(dǎo)學(xué)生聯(lián)系實(shí)際,在生活中踐行雷鋒精神,提高自我的公德意識(shí)。